http://zhoner.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] zhoner.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] artemdragunov 2011-10-22 11:03 am (UTC)

Никакая прза, изв. букву о прпстил, слишком много пробелов и мелочей. В каждом 3-ом предложении много действий. Стиль простой и нету фантазии для читателя. Просто рассказ.
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